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When hell freezes and heaven burns,
When mountains tumble and Earth ceases to turn,
                Where will you stand?

When the oceans rise and wind roars,
When the walls tumble and each breath is war,
                What will you do?

When madness descends and chaos reigns,
When the plight of man cannot remain,
                How will you leave?

When the ground rolls and splits underfoot,
The forests and cities burn, covered with soot,
                Will you run?

When screams can be heard under the falling sky
And the whole world looks out from dead-man’s eyes,
                Who will you be?
Decided to write this just in time for our supposed apocalypse today! Tell me, would you be happy with who you are if the world ends?
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KodokuNoNana Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013   General Artist
Absolutely gorgeous! Great job!
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thought-provoking and relevant. however, i would change line 3, 4th stanza to read "where will you run?" the extra syllable will make it consistent with the others. nice job though.
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the feedback! I agree with your suggestion, and I think I will change it :)
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TommySixxx Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
It's got a good rhythm and symmetry, especially in its images. I love the penultimate line "And the whole world looks out from dead-man's eyes," :)
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the feedback! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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TommySixxx Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Your welcome!
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dwkeiko Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great structure and imagery :D
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :blowkiss:
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dwkeiko Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome X3 :heart:
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RedTearRiding Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. I can die peacefully :+fav:
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