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If a demon heard an angel sing from above,
And an angel and a demon fell in love,
Once they answer to passion's call,
Does the demon rise or the angel fall?
And though they may love in the truest way,
Where in heaven, hell or Earth could they stay?
Hunted by those who can't understand and those who refuse
And soon, so soon, they would have to choose
Between loving together, or saving each other's souls
And be left with a grief that could not be consoled.
Forever they would wander, longing for the other's embrace,
And wanting nothing more than to see their lover's face.
Their doomed love would destroy them, it would tear them apart
And they would slowly bleed to death
                                   from broken hearts.
I'm pretty proud of this right now :) this is one of the only things I have written in over a month! Maybe, just maybe, my writer's block is over.
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ChetUnGwan Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm sorry, but this reminds me of Good Omens. I'm probably missing the point.
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett book??
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ChetUnGwan Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah, you've read it?
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Neil Gaiman is one of my favourite authors, and I just read that book over the summer. To say the least, I loved the insanity of it :D
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ChetUnGwan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It was a great book. Your poem reminds me somewhat of Aziraphale and Crowley.
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Theknownunknown Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
This is just too perfect.
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KodokuNoNana Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013   General Artist
Marvellous!
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heartdiver123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. This is beautiful and haunting. I love it.
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seelifein69 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really cool! I like it
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Louise-1 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
A wonderful piece of writing.
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AmeliadosSantos Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes, you are completely right on being proud of this. this is a masterpiece! :clap:
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MariChiwii Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
very beautiful and emotional! congrats. i really really love it!
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nerdizzle92 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
This is an incredible poem. <3 It reminds me of the novel I am writing. (: You have a beautiful way with words.
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you so much!:D It really means a lot to me to hear that.
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nerdizzle92 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
Of course! n_n
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I am VERY MUCH in love with this ;D
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That really means a lot to me! Thank you :)
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome!
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brettthefox Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing <3
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I really appreciate that :)
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NicolaWingedDeity Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow I'd never thought it that way.... does the demon rise or the angel fall?
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really try to make my work as original as possible, so that means a lot. Thank you for the fav, too. :) I really appreciate it.
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NicolaWingedDeity Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! (=
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SerpentineAthena Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so beautifully sad... great work!
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
love is stronger
than différences
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree entirely. :)
Thank you for the fav on this.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
:)
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